The raindrops glistened
In the rays of the sun.
Gray clouds roll
In the turquoise sky.
The sun’s glow trickled with the drizzle
Sun and rain
Danced in the afternoon.
.
My departing
From the warmth of your bed
To walk back on that puddled road
Makes rainbows
Form bands of black and gray.
.
My heart
Empty as that suitcase,
Gaped open like my palm
Yearning for your hand.
.
Torn between staying and leaving
My soul is like being drenched in the raining sunshine.
Parched in the downpour
But beaming in the overcast.
.
Under the disconcerted skies,
Let me feel the moist of sunrays
In your every kiss
And shower me the luminance of raindrops
Gleaming from your eyes.
.
Promise me
To clear the skies upon my return.
For my soul is weary of being soaked
Of its indiscretion.
At our flat. 5 Jul 2008. 11:15am.
is that a poem or part of a lyric? either way i really like it =) i should add this to the visitors section of my site with proper credits of course, but lovely.
Nice!!!!
Now that reminds me to post my own poem as well. I checked the lines very well, magandang gawan ng storyboard parang pang mtv rin to! =) Post more of your poems!
Duskfading: Haha! Napaka-creative mo tlaga callcenter gal! Salamat
“My heart
Empty as that suitcase,
Gaped open like my palm
Yearning for your hand.”
maluha-luha ako!
eimtach~.~
nice poem..promise